Today in lesson we got feedback from our class and Mr Wallis for things we could improve on.
At 2 Minutes one of the fast cut edits to the beat doesn't match up- we had one too many shots in. We have now taken it out
We should put more church scenes in it and more of the high angle corner shots.
During the chorus the shots of Jacob in the open fields are really exposed so they need making darker.
At some points the camera is very shaky and needs sorting out.
Lastly, we need to focus on the narrative now.
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